Vivinfrance is a frequent stop on my weekly poetry reading. Viv's work is intelligent, heartfelt, honest, and often refreshing. Now Viv has professed to not be entirely fond of wordles. However, her contribution to last week's wordle, got me waning all nostalgic for NaPoWriMo, and it hasn't been that long in the grave. She refers to NaPoWriMo as a month of animated scribbling. Indeed!
This week, the first four words I selected came from Viv's piece, Dawn in Anse à la Mouche (The bay of the fly). Those four include mists, breathes, supersedes, and seaweed. Those four words drove a search for more words that dealt with water. My favorite wordle post of the week was Angie Werren's crows build nests with sticks and twigs, and hers footed the bill for water words: evaporation, released, river, and water. finally, I pulled four words from the poem, the end of it on Marianne's blog *elle ecrit*. These did not have to do with water, but I liked them: slides, embroidered, tiny, and tugs.
22 comments:
It seems I open the comment session this week. It's a pleasure:
http://phoenix-em.com/mariyakoleva/2011/05/wordle-embroidered-seaweed/
Here's mine:
EVAPORATED
This was fun, Brenda! Thank you.
http://inthecornerofmyeye.blogspot.com/2011/05/summer-ecstasy.html
Here's my piece, and I'm off to read yours!
The River
A hint of sarcasm in the title that evaporates all too swiftly,
http://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/2011/05/08/soaking-wet/
Elizabeth
Thanks for the words. I wouldn't have gotten anything even similar without them
Rough as a Cob
Thanks Brenda. Mine is quite short.
http://flaubert-poetrywithme.blogspot.com/2011/05/molecular-structure-whirl-of-wordling.html
Oops! Thanks Viv, Angie and Marianne.
Thanks for the wordle!
I am not my mother
Brenda, A gentle tone of a difficult subject and I particularly liked "The river supersedes her."
for some reason, could not comment on your blog.
Thanks for your comment, Irene...don't know why my blog knocks some out. I appreciate the "gentle tone" comment. One of my goals this week was to not go so dark with my piece. Perhaps "gentle" is a step in that direction. :)
~Brenda
Here is my attempt at this week's wordle...
Message in a Bottle...Once Full
Now that I've written...I look forward to reading all of your posts, as well!
~Paula Wanken
mm water is always evocative.
http://crankymango.blogspot.com/2011/05/encounter.html
I'm still blushing from Brenda's comments. Here's my wordle:
http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com/2011/05/09/low-tide-at-granville/
I'll come back later to read.
http://sharplittlepencil.wordpress.com/2011/05/09/spring-to-life-again/
Enjoying seeing spring upon us! Thanks for the Wordle, Brenda!
Many thanks for the mention of my blog. Here's my wordle:
http://herwordsbloomed.blogspot.com/2011/05/sunday-wordle-3.html
I have just discovered your blog and your Wordle prompts! Love the idea! Here is mine!
Another Life Cycle
At last I managed to get to it!
http://imnotaverse.wordpress.com/2011/05/10/calm/
Okay, here's Snow Melt (WordPress) or Snow Melt (Blogspot)
My first entry here
[url=http://henryclemmonspoet.blogspot.com/2011/05/mist-of-mint-wordle-3.html]Mist of Mint[/url]
Henry Clemmons, Blog: Underside of Green
I guess the HTML code I know doesn't work here.
My title is at: http://henryclemmonspoet.blogspot.com/2011/05/mist-of-mint-wordle-3.html
It is called "Mist of Mint". You can get by clicking on my blog, "Underide of Green".
Thank you.
oh, brenda -- thank you so much for your kind comments and for using my words! I'm so surprised and the support literally made my day brighter.
I am just catching up today; it's been a rough week. hoping to get back on track this afternoon.
here's my poem for this wordle --
released
angie
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